three word wednesday: escape, hum, vibrant
photo: i’m on cloud nine, windybug, flickr
it’s nice to escape routine
running rushing rowing
straight to the edge
peering past the wasted oil leaks
across the humid highways
like thelma and louise
what an adventure
the hum of an engine revving
racing down hot desert roads
though not so darn edgy
perchance the crook of a rest stop
a solitary ready park bench
basting in a soft bubble of benevolence
anticipating a come along presence
a manna manifestation
of simple observation
writing words along the wall
of bright blue sky
dotted with a wedge of geese
honking and hollering
heading towards somewhere
a vibrant act of wistful wool gathering
a riding companion atop puffy white clouds
carrying a collaborating compass
transported to the kingdom of connection
yeah, it’s a nice spring day
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
It’s like putting words to your daydreams.
Superb! A ride-along dream. It makes me yearn for things unknown.
loved the whole thing but this especially! “a manna manifestation
of simple observation
writing words along the wall
of bright blue sky”
that is flat out perfect!
Yeah, I like the title? in the picture, and your poetry makes me want to go on an adventure too!
Nice!
Thanks for bringing me along your lovely spring day.
Dreamy and light-filled…I could feel the spring air on my face. Beautiful!
Beautiful.
I love that last line. It ties all these charming rambles together and makes the poem.
wonderful piece…good feelings!
I hear a doubt between the words, perhaps not all of us likes being outside
I dearly love the line – writing words along the wall of bright blue sky
this is so fun… oh, lovely and exactly what I needed to read today.
(and thank you for commenting on my 3WW poem)….
A mixture of a dreamy, fantastic escape from the daily humdrums of life!
Its nice when sometimes we take life in an adventurous ways to escape the stress and fatigue of a busy life!
And just looking around, we would realized we really are missing a lot in life!
That’s some imagery well delivered. I heard the honking of some traveling geese moments before reading this. Great energy in this one!
A lovely Spring poem — you painted wonderful pictures with your words!
Full of possibilities. This weeks prompt brought out some great writing.