3WW, Poetry

spring speculation

three word wednesday: escape, hum, vibrant
photo: i’m on cloud nine, windybug, flickr

it’s nice to escape routine
running rushing rowing
straight to the edge
peering past the wasted oil leaks
across the humid highways

like thelma and louise
what an adventure
the hum of an engine revving
racing down hot desert roads
though not so darn edgy

perchance the crook of a rest stop
a solitary ready park bench
basting in a soft bubble of benevolence
anticipating a come along presence

a manna manifestation
of simple observation
writing words along the wall
of bright blue sky
dotted with a wedge of geese
honking and hollering
heading towards somewhere

a vibrant act of wistful wool gathering
a riding companion atop puffy white clouds
carrying a collaborating compass
transported to the kingdom of connection

yeah, it’s a nice spring day


16 thoughts on “spring speculation

  1. loved the whole thing but this especially! “a manna manifestation
    of simple observation
    writing words along the wall
    of bright blue sky”

    that is flat out perfect!

  2. I hear a doubt between the words, perhaps not all of us likes being outside

    I dearly love the line – writing words along the wall of bright blue sky

  3. A mixture of a dreamy, fantastic escape from the daily humdrums of life!

    Its nice when sometimes we take life in an adventurous ways to escape the stress and fatigue of a busy life!

    And just looking around, we would realized we really are missing a lot in life!

  4. That’s some imagery well delivered. I heard the honking of some traveling geese moments before reading this. Great energy in this one!

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