unexpectedly
gentle nudge peeling layers
shuck silent troubles
perplexed by pressure
crystal chandeliers falling
wet flood spattered floors
ticking clock erased
paperless fragments flying
border crossing yield
sanctuary found
there beside the willow tree
bitter taste revealed
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SundayScribblings No 117 topic: vision;
photo: World Traveler, NatureWalk, flickr
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
Skillful imagery. A poem to study.
I can actually see that happening so…well done! 🙂
interesting and mysterious!
you write so beautifully! this was charming!
thanks for all your great comments! after work today I felt like sweet gifts were left on my desk!! :))
Adore how sharp images burst! They seem like challenging notes of a song!
Very nice imagery–thanks for sharing.
~Saoirse
Thanks for the comment on my Sunday Scribblings post! Your poem sure is beautiful. I love the way it begins – “unexpectedly”.
Mysterious, but full of imagery. Excellently done.
Simply delightful.
an enigma made up of strong images – i’ll have to read this a few more times!!!
Where did it come from? The words I mean. The image is beautiful but I want to know more.
b
Amazing imagery, I loved it!
A wonderful piece you’ve put together here. You always amaze me how you can put together several haiku to make a single poem – I’m going to have to try that someday…
beautiful post
This is a piece to read over and over
each time a different image rises
Wonderful photo you posted.