crying
the world fell through
poised for endless free flight
washed by the waves of wet water
souls sank
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visit weekend wordsmith. this week’s prompt: it didn’t happen
crying
the world fell through
poised for endless free flight
washed by the waves of wet water
souls sank
* * * * * *
visit weekend wordsmith. this week’s prompt: it didn’t happen
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
This serious, deep and dramatic! Great write!
I’ve always loved your poetry. You now seem to be moving into something new and exciting.
This is brief but amazing. Wonderful!
definitely drowning in sadness…
So much said with so few words. Poignant!
Both of these poems are very delicate and beautiful despite their sad tone. They have all the immaculate artisanship that we have come to expect in your work. Precise and complete and perfect.
This is a great pairing of poem and picture, and the title gives it an intriguing twist. Very cool.