tidbit
story about
the summer solstice
tilting
perfectly round
the world renews
commence
summer season
awaken slumber sleeping
here
by the
lake summer initiates
bright
blue cloudless
skies shine outloud
honor
golden days
summer flame sparks
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totally optional prompts requesting summer poems;
photo: Solstice Sunset on The Curlews, Tony Murphy, flickr;
recently discovered haynaku poetry form by way of silent verses and ravenswing
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Hi, this form is starting to grow on me, I like the way you chained the different thoughts together.
It creates a really unique rhythm and tone when you put these forms together. This one is lovely to read out loud and has a very graceful quality,
This is a marvellous, and different, look at summer.
Loved it.
I love your descriptive language and use of this form.
-Nicole
Atmospheric, and the picture matches the words.
vey well put together – I feel myself there. 🙂
It finally arrived, didn’t it? You do exceedingly well with this form – very nice!!
Wonderful cool blue haynaku my friend. You make me “one morn believer” in the cool salvation of the
here to hot summer that has just begun.
love-bd
Great economy of words that seem perfectly chosen to capture the mood of the season. I wait all year for Summer.
More later- LL
You’ve inspired and challenged me again. Beautiful. Brilliant.