weekend wordsmith no 84: sensible
photo: “Eleanor’s Sensible Shoes”, by appaloosa
alive her skin breathes
cognizant her consciousness
restrains the howl
efficient miles
reverberating comfort
disturbance aware
prepossessing light
formality desire
unreachable touch
her husband covets
not eleanor’s affection
nor her rosey cheeks
distant young demure
her smile reaches just shy
his once open arms
i am not sure why,, but i really enjoyed this… almost as if you know something about the inter workings of their relationship i don’t… but wish i did… very well done….
I agree with Paisley. Well done. Relationships are certainly a difficult breed at best. Have a nice night.