thomg’s three word wednesday this week’s offer: gesture, immediate, treasure
photo: willow’s magpie tales no 40
turning back around he wanted some gesture
something immediate that would cause
a sting she would never forget
opening a valve his heart exploded
smudging her soft hard trembling lips
abruptly destroying their last link
he watched in sorrow satisfaction
as her face unexpectedly unraveled
regret glistening, water dripping
her body falling carelessly
he now had a treasure he could keep
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
This is too good..
–Someone Is Special–
Wow. powerful.
That’s a powerful piece – gives me goose bumps.
Intriguing…
i like
Lovely words, intriguing write!
Wow! What a scene you’ve desctibed. Very nicely written.
I felt the kick of this deep piece. What a solid write!
cool
this is excellent, quite disturbing too…
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