three word wednesday: abandon, gradual, precise; and last week’s grasp, pacify, dread; this form cleave was introduced during rwp april 2010 napowrimo..still working on form and the ideaology that really intrigues me..; one single impression: floating
photo: Atmospherics, ethanea, flickr
the gradual rise of perfect passes silent watchdog curtain window watches
there’s little to criticize noting nothing exceeding an ordinary
billowing light layer abandon yet aroused the defeated dread of dawn’s distinct design
precise ontime rainbow illumination grasps the untaken to pacify darkness
converse connect a grasp and spell the slippery shadowy companion
telepathic nudge happiness devoured
reach to rest soiree bothersome castaway erased
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
hello Piece of Pie~
you’ve combined the two prompts into a nice cleave. hope all is well.
I’d love to hear this out loud. I bet it comes alive — with two voices, even.
I’ve never read a cleave poem before. Fascinating. I really like what you did here. Nice imagery. My favorite: silent watchdog curtain window watches.
I actually read it out loud – and it was totally cool.
This had a dual personality thing going on. Part beauty with just an under current of fear. I liked it.
very nice poem…and one of the coolest pics ever.
What a wonderful combination of prompts! Very well done.