OneSingleImpression, Poetry, tanka

inamorata

one single impression: this week’s prompt by leo is joie de vivre (the joy of living)
photo: Seashells, miqul, flickr

i’ve used tanka [5-7-5-7-7] and a cleave [for those who wanna know] which was one of the prompts for read write poem april 2010 napowrimo

anchored in your blue eyes  watching the drift of tides
swimming in a sea of blue  shifting sandbar wet door reveal
backstroke blue divine  nestled sleeping shells
submerge serenade sublime   simple treasures lure me near
the line of your lips thrill me   surplus exhilaration

inamorata. lover

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3WW, cleave, OneSingleImpression, Poetry

takeover

three word wednesday:  abandon, gradual, precise; and last week’s grasp, pacify, dread; this form cleave was introduced during rwp april 2010 napowrimo..still working on form and the ideaology that really intrigues me..; one single impression: floating
photo: Atmospherics,  ethanea, flickr

the gradual rise of perfect passes    silent watchdog curtain window watches

there’s little to criticize    noting nothing exceeding an ordinary

billowing light layer abandon    yet aroused the defeated dread of dawn’s distinct design

precise ontime rainbow illumination   grasps the untaken to pacify darkness

converse connect a grasp and spell   the slippery shadowy companion

telepathic nudge   happiness devoured

reach to rest soiree   bothersome castaway erased

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