three word wednesday: jolt, ribbon zeal
photo: Pink mirror, phr4nq, flickr
beautiful pink ribbon
fluttering free finds retreat
in the wind of a moored mirror
noticed now neglected
gathering interest
roving wondering eyes
forage forgotten faces
countless curled photos
meaningful worth unchanged
their smiling zeal
declares gazing mute
simple surrounded silence
basking in reflection
a sudden jolt brings back
the beginning journey
restless beating heart
packs another box
placing life’s pages
careful not to tear
bind too tight the string
wrinkled waters splashing
kindles one life resting
another disturbing the drift
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
This has a sing-song quality about it that I found quite satisfying.
You’ve captured the pink ribbon in the mirror and then the thought of this in the poem, nicely written!
Reflections and reactions to them – great contrasts…
simple surrounded silence
basking in reflection
gorgeous lines there. This was a lovely piece.
This might sound strange but the words perfectly match the pink & white curtain through the reflection of the mirror.
It’s relaxing and soothing yet the content is sad and disturbing. Truly wonderful.
This lines ring still
placing life’s pages
careful not to tear
bind too tight the string
I somehow missed this last week but glad I went back and checked.
Great tempo and lyrical qualities. Well done!!