OneSingleImpression, tanka

burning cold

one single impression: indurated
photo: Flaming flower power, jmanj, flickr

unattended flame
solidified silver steel
orange blossoms red
cold shivering searing sweat
dripping melting memories


10 thoughts on “burning cold

  1. I like your tanka. I haven’t done one for quite a while.
    Your alternating hot and cold, cold and hot is wonderful; cold shivering searing sweat is the best! The cold solidified silver steel fits the prompt very nicely.

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