plucking
petaled roses
the scent scatters
bees
buzzing loud
tasting the sweet
gardens
fully engulfed
flames of color
my
favorite flower
remains a secret
recently discovered haynaku by way of silent verses and another blogger, but cannot for the life of me find her blog… it is ravenswing; photo: chrissie2003, flickr; totally optional prompts this week flower poems.
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Great picture. Like the verse too. Now I go and look out for haynaku!
Excellent — you have these great sense details and the last stanza opens the whole thing up into a larger point of view, into mystery. I like this form too but I’ve never tried it.
I love secret gardens – but a secret flower – Wow!
lovely atmosphere
An air of mystery… lovely!
the first and the last ones are my favorite but they are all quite lovely, I may try this form
‘fully engulfed
flames of color’
just right! Gorgeous picture and poem.
enchanting words and an absolutely awesome feast for the eyes….
This is great.
This is just breath taking, Where did you learn this type of Haikau? What is it called again? Do you have other examples of this beautiful form.
BTW, your poem is excellent! Just wonderful.
love-bd
Really stimulates the senses
Love this – I’ve seen haynaku but haven’t tried any – you did a great job!
I like your use of the form – your poem reads like a string of individual beads, each beautiful in its own right and uniting to form a gorgeous necklace.
Awesome.
-Nicole
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