thomg’s three word wednesday: drench, immune, radiate
observation immune
not on their way rescue
tumbling turmoil
dust to dust dry drench
sorrow seeping sigh
rearranging righteous
surrender sagacity
handfuls of horrible harm
scattered souls survival
gather their belongings
the empty hollow heights
trace the outline of his face
hold and release
here comes the light
radiate eradicate
sand sinking sincerity
wow such a powerful poem.
the alliteration makes really conveys the relentlessness the effort..a battle..Jae
Great alliterations and they do make strong points!!
Love the alliteration. Very powerful writing.
“not on their way rescue”
cuz ladies need to rescue themselves!