haiku my heart, Poetry

recuerda mi corazon. skimming water

rebecca’s friday recuerda mi corazon [haiku my heart]
photo: bluesky, cubagallery, flickr

Blue Sky

with a little poke
push forward

strong stir of sorts
soft and simple

arousal unwind
unrestrained wander

slippery stillness
uncoil the knot

swayed by stars
crashing chimera

calming cacophony
comes the eerie echo

a time blows by
when we weren’t watching

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10 thoughts on “recuerda mi corazon. skimming water

  1. manueland says:

    The unseen is perceptible, written magically, just by you.
    I love these “recuerda mi corazón”!.

  2. Noelle Clearwater says:

    I adore your wordplay, Ms. pie. No one, and I mean no one, does it better than you, alliteration, assonance, consonance, you name it, you are queen, and so evocative. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku post and for stopping by Indaba as well. I have a charity post there today. If you have time to stop in. If not, no worries.
    xo,
    Noelle

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