one single impression: enigma
photo: morning tide, danimal174, flickr
bright white mystic moon
pulling tugging worldly waters
restless constant waves
unbound boundary
intangible sightless strings
guardian shoreline
playful mystery
tempestuous tidal train
sailing sunny days
acres of oceans
salty water hydrosphere
body surf magic
deep uncloak design
below shining fluent fish
never sleeping still
vivid imagery , great choice and use of words.well done.
I love the mystery and alure of the sea. You poem and photo paint the picture perfectly.
These are beautiful, enigmatic words that capture so well the bizaree and beautiful relationship between us and earth and the cosmos.
I love the alliteration and the lushness of the language. Here I am taking a break after 30 days, and you are going strong! Sheesh! :0)
What beautiful imagery in this one.
Wow, what mastery over words! The feelings just flow, no obstacles, just soft and smooth movement forward.. loved it and loved your encouragement more.. let us keep meeting in this delicious world of thoughts..
Lovely imagery! The enigma that holds us all!
This is truly art… thought provoking, beautiful. It’s best described as luxurious writing, I think.
Thank you for welcoming me into your poetic world. I was “referred” to the prompt by Linda Goin, and she’s never steered me wrong yet. Veteran Poetic Asides, did my PAD there. Keep me “posted”! Peace.
It does seem alive and you described it wonderfully. I just saw a science show on the universe being made up of tiny strings.
Wonderfully vivid images of the ocean. It makes me want to travel!
Neptune and the fluent fish?hmmm. The sea is enigmatic
and a wondrous powerful phenomemon.
What a beautiful poem! I love how the lines seem to read like the waves…and so very true- what an enigma the ocean is in the truest sense!
This is truly one of the great mysteries. Good poem.
so much a part of the mechanics of our world =)
wow!