read write poem napowrimo day 21 perfectly flawed. write a poem about flaws and perfection in yourself or in nature or write about how you feel about being imperfect or perfect; three word wednesday: ebb negotiate random; photo: Town Car White Wall Wheel, Sparks68, flickr
loving the perfect imperfection
where one half commands
a quarter questions
we negotiate the expenditure
our love shifts into cost control
amuse me with your viscosity
how your hands negotiate
the curves and straight away
kooky kosher connect
courageous cool
we sink compliantly
the random risk
of cozy reluctance
tandom synchronicity
turning wheels directed
towards docile domicile
the ebb of kindled quiet flame
you barbecue medium rear steaks
i occupy with green salad dujour
together we sip the red wine of
a lasting imperfect alliance
blazing stars and comets cast
agreeable accession
really liked this – a lasting imperfect alliance? definition for marriage 🙂
Hi! Love the flow. Sounds like post mod beat if that makes sense
Love the words also. I was actually reading it out loud–speaks to me
And this is of course what life’s all about
together we sip the red wine of
a lasting imperfect alliance
Though I forget 🙂
Awesome.. “our love shifts into cost control” GREAT line..
WOW!
“we negotiate the expenditure
our love shifts into cost control”
absolutely true!
your words are gems 😀
A delightful read – sounds like love to me and I do recognize that old Caddy with the wide whites! Nice work!
“together we sip the red wine of
a lasting imperfect alliance”
love this! good one!!