read write poem: napowrimo day 6, converse with images
photo: Cory.Lum, flickr
i recently started multiplying
the bobbing bubbling bubbles
in my pink pillow possibilities
i melodiously measure the
kaleidoscopic distance
between nurturing now
and departed already
life is ideally idle
breakfast buttering cinnabons
dinner sipping chianti silence
behold my backward glances
in the frosted memory mirror
unobserved static
inperceptible traces
your scent sticks around
teetering telephone lines
between day and night
twenty or two abstractions
counting encompassing circles
your breath still comes
in wisps of vanishing vapors
Your turn of phrases and images are so beautiful. Loved this poem so much …
I love pillows! Nicely written.
Pamela
I agree with Uma about the “turn of phrases and images.” I’ll have to read this one again and again! l=)
–Stefanie
great work. Love the alliteration.
Wonderful images and scents. I could taste the alliteration.
~Mark
Sensuous sounds to go with the sensual image! Reminds me of Georgia O’Keeffe. Saturated sounds, saturated colors and smells and tastes and touches!