read write poem: napowrimo no 5, make your poetry personal. this is an interesting prompt today. my thoughts, we place ourselves in everything we write some more shielded than others some oh so transparent. so giving license to expose all with a creative kinky splash why not??!! sounds like a challenge i could not resist. fantasy fiction art in its truest form.
photo: Massimo Pelagagge, flickr
patiently popping bottle tops
collecting delusional diamonds
pink strappy sandals
a light airy opine
hallucinating haughty
intermittent frequency
especially so the housework
dust so dull
vacuum vacuous sneeze
heading homeward
the company comes calling
normal misconception
fantasy feigning floozy
caught 12 spiders
charlotte comes too
there’s no recognition
secrete spin and stash
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
Charlotte made me smile, then the washing machine stopped spinning.
“secret spin and stash”: nice! Just discovered your website, One More Believer. I’ll be back. And I invite you to read my poems at http://www.gregoconnell.com (Find NaPoWiMo 2010 in the top menu bar) – Greg =)
Wow, this is great fun, thanks.
I really like the sound in this poem! nice alliteration 🙂 it’s one of my favorite things to use in poetry
I like your “creative kinky splash”!
For her
A very fun poem!
Pamela
Again, I really love the image/word combinations you come up with…. yay for creative kinky splashes!
Thanks for your comments. I enjoy the sounds and flow of your piece today, too!
I love your style … you’ve created so many wonderful images! And you have a fantastic blog!
So good! Thanks for sharing!
This was a fun read!
Love the meter, the alliteration – the lilt! Great poem to read out loud. Fun! (Poor Charlotte – but. I suppose it had to be.)
well this is cool..with pace and twist and much personality.
Regards,
Doug
Just love your images,it’s always a delight to read your poems.
Thanks for visiting my blog! Your poem and your photo are both equally alluring. Love that you included Charlotte.