Napowrimo, Poetry, ReadWritePoem, tanka

erotic engine

read write poem: napowrimo day 7: love funny side up humorous tanka. shamelessly took license and did not follow the 5-7-5-7-7 i usually do…
photo: harvley davidson vrsc51


while his harley gently sleeps
he loves me so sensuously
at dawn’s approach the piggy oinks
he spiritually spits and religiously rubs
steamy spotless foreplay rumbling devotion

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12 thoughts on “erotic engine

  1. kinda sad, as well as funny. I haven’t come upon the tanka form before today, but I get the feeling your poem in pretty close to its “classic” form if there is one.

  2. Richelle says:

    wow i really like this! the alliteration is good, especially “spiritually spit” good job!

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