sunday scribblings: no. 273 give/gave/giving/gift and 3www: gag, maintain, omit
photo: window, rostybrandx
basking in the bright bionic beautiful
just pass the one-way rambling remedy
did the small measure pour out and over
no asking nor telling, the stirring simply started
the offering floated over the private precipice
well-meaning wanderings surfacing windows
flung wide open, heady pink heart healings
maintain and allege, shade and shift
a red gag gone, bighearted bits adrift
omit not the first line long gone by
10 thoughts on “ss and 3ww.paradise outspoken”
I’ll be ruminating on the beauty of this….
Reminds me of flowers! Lovely.
‘the bright bionic beautiful’..no wonder that window is torn open..wonderful use of language..so rich and chewy..Jae
Absolutely lovely wonderful use of language
I love the pairing of that image with what you wrote. Healing among broken and shattered windows. Windows that if closed, if they were not broken, would keep things out? Several lines I like a lot. But the last one really stays with me.
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Now then, isn’t this one of the finest images I’ve read in a while? “windows / flung wide open.” Your poem reads best out loud, like all great poetry should. Just superb!
“flung wide open, heady pink heart healings
maintain and allege, shade and shift”
I need some healings…
Ahhh this is beautiful…I enjoyed the journey in this one! I love that the red gag is gone at the end!
this is such a wonderful description in this poem
perfect…..love the alliteration…and very soulful poetry