rebecca’s friday recuerda mi corazon [haiku my heart]
photo: jenny munro, flickr
wordless winter walk
in the clasp of his warm hands
chattering silence
the crushing sound of hard snow
melting moody marvelous love
rebecca’s friday recuerda mi corazon [haiku my heart]
photo: jenny munro, flickr
wordless winter walk
in the clasp of his warm hands
chattering silence
the crushing sound of hard snow
melting moody marvelous love
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
so glad i could read this reverie right before going to bed.
may your love shocked words paint my dreams.
thank you for a perfect slice of pie….
‘Chattering silence” liked the words.. interestingly expressed..
Ah, the walkers…
Blessed One, Haiku My Heart!
Dreamy image, I LOVE it!!!and your Haiku too!! Your collaboration should be called Love Strands!
Wordless walk…
chattering silence…
crushing snow
melting, moody love
Some interesting use of oxymoron here Cinda. Altogether it paints a romantic picture, but there is an undertone of things unsaid, held back, even in the clasp of that warm hand. Just my take on it. Very keen haiku.
xo,
Noelle
Fascinating construction.
Have a nice day, Boonie
i’ve always enjoyed a love story and you’ve shared a snippet, a scene, of one’s love for the other. sometimes words aren’t needed to express how you feel. hope all is well.
this haiku is evocative and lovely. i can see, feel and hear this winter walk, through your words…
“chattering silence”… how perfect. I love the sound of snow falling, so silent, yet… it isn’t. Your words evoke the feeling of something quiet and special, no conversation needed.
Deb
how lovely, quite a beautiful scene