three word wednesday: erase, meadow, trace ; big tent poetry: monday prompt: wordle…
photo: camtb, flickr
there was never any question
as to who was going first
he was pretty intent on
the erase of any trace
we labored together
creating a world in the
middle of chaotic
where one could
hyphenate, drop off
or add a meadow or two
operating on half
a tank, we separate
a full tank easily
ignoring the dangerous
dark part of pleasure
alighting from the
long ride, it was easy to
praise, hunger and resent
placating the tall weedy fields
long abandoned summer salutation
milk-y way stars
our comfort’s dull edge stigma
pardon the extrinsic cough
beautiful!
😉
That was beautiful!
Provocative piece – the second stanza is so superb!
Nicely done. I like the way the words flow and connect in surprising ways.
Cool combination of prompts.
brilliant.. 🙂
This is a beautiful place to be…the blogs visual appeal is the best I have seen in a while.
The post is just quirky enough to make us read over again. Well done.
Thank you for dropping by. Be well.
b
Just full of great lines. This is such a strong piece. Thanks for sharing.
“”ignoring the dangerous
dark part of pleasure””
A place I think I may be tired of ignoring.
I also like the lines:
‘ignoring the dangerous
dark part of pleasure’
but the entire poem was superlative.
Beautiful. The second stanza really painted a wonderful picture.
Such an intimate image. Thank you.
very beautiful.. lovely images painted by your words and also the photo itself!