readwritepoem day 25 first things first. first sentence you hear or read after you’ve read today’s prompt take that and build a poem around it. “don’t push me” as she takes a step and flies over the edge, this is the first thing i heard… ; one single impression: fissure; photo: Raging Water, ahamediqbal, flickr
somewhere subtle deep
raging racing waters breech
erase rock release
crashing crooning thunder
roaring tumbling groaning grains
terra firma ebb
where once was cryptic
breezes in a wadi way
come my love to me
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
Alliteration works well – gives a sense of those waves crashing against the cliffs.
Oh, come to that beautiful space.
That is beautiful. The alliteration rolls in my brain with elements of the earth and someone special. Reminds me of Oregon.
Beautiful!
~Mark
Very nice! You make this brutally succinct but it still just flows over everything. Wonderfully dense, cinemagraphic.
Very beautiful and well done.
Great use of words and rhythm. I can hear the image and the thoughts. Lovely!!
I like how the three haiku tie into one unified piece. Well done!
If it starts to rain…
get out of the wadi!
Hi and thanks for visiting. I like how these pieces fuse together. Using the word “wadi”, for me, gives a Babylonian essence to the piece.
Terra firma ebb…Nice!
“come my love to me”!
yes…t’was a beautiful ending!
I love the alliteration used- and the overall interpretation is wonderful!
wonderful words, well watered.
ViV