one single impression: hesitation
photo: RAge_caGE, flickr
caught in the coolness
chocolate wrapped diversion
we linger too long
modesty denied
momentary rendezvous
hidden holiday
the silence of sound
wails softly in the wind
intoxicating
one single impression: hesitation
photo: RAge_caGE, flickr
caught in the coolness
chocolate wrapped diversion
we linger too long
modesty denied
momentary rendezvous
hidden holiday
the silence of sound
wails softly in the wind
intoxicating
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
We often get caught in moments of reflection that are interpreted by others as hesitation.
it’s hidden, so there’s hesitation we might get caught….:)
Rich and lovely words…
This is so seductive and lovely..
Melanie
Ah, the chocolate – wonderful. These are such fine stanzas of hesitation. The last one is exciting!
Nicely written. I like the subtly innuendo and imagery.
beautiful
I love the last one; sound really does have a silence to it, and vis versa, and I think you expressed it perfectly. I also really enjoyed the “hidden holiday” in your second haiku.
I love chocolate and have a little stash.
Your third haiku reminded me of Anish Kapoor’s sculpture in New Zealand. I would love to be near and hear the wind howling through.
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oOo…entranced by the illicit quality of this poem…
the feelings played within…
Oh lllaaaalaaa….I like this one very much. A great start to my day, thanks. 🙂
beautiful words………..”the silence of sound wails softly in the wind
intoxicating”….that is amazing…….!!
This is such a subtle description of seduction, lovely!
Compelling verse. Hesitation–the additional time we take to reflect on the moment–can be the source of further insight and perhaps a better way of moving our life along.
chocolate wrapped diversion… lovely…I could hesitate in that one all day!
beautiful and seductive
All Beautiful and gently seductive…but I guess that’s the point…certainly when I hesitate slightly.
i could listen for the silence of sound all night. lovely!