Haiku, OneSingleImpression

intermezzo

one single impression: hesitation
photo:  RAge_caGE, flickr

caught in the coolness
chocolate wrapped diversion
we linger too long

modesty denied
momentary rendezvous
hidden holiday

the silence of sound
wails softly in the wind
intoxicating

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18 thoughts on “intermezzo

  1. I love the last one; sound really does have a silence to it, and vis versa, and I think you expressed it perfectly. I also really enjoyed the “hidden holiday” in your second haiku.

  2. I love chocolate and have a little stash.
    Your third haiku reminded me of Anish Kapoor’s sculpture in New Zealand. I would love to be near and hear the wind howling through.
    ..

  3. Compelling verse. Hesitation–the additional time we take to reflect on the moment–can be the source of further insight and perhaps a better way of moving our life along.

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