one single impression: indurated
photo: Flaming flower power, jmanj, flickr
unattended flame
solidified silver steel
orange blossoms red
cold shivering searing sweat
dripping melting memories
one single impression: indurated
photo: Flaming flower power, jmanj, flickr
unattended flame
solidified silver steel
orange blossoms red
cold shivering searing sweat
dripping melting memories
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
beautiful
That is beautiful- the poem and the image! I love the last line- the image it evokes is wonderful
I like your tanka. I haven’t done one for quite a while.
Your alternating hot and cold, cold and hot is wonderful; cold shivering searing sweat is the best! The cold solidified silver steel fits the prompt very nicely.
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Dripping memories! Wow. Just want to hold to the moment
This is lovely. wonderful use of prompt and great photo. Well done.
Melanie
. . a lovely poem ..
unattended flame – – is intense ..
our sweat dripping memories. . . wow. the whole thing is gorgeous, but those last lines . . . wow
I love the idea of dripping memories. Excellent.
Yes. Yes. Yes.
The back and forth, the changing of things. Exceptional. You caught it perfectly.