Haiku, haiku my heart

haiku my heart.fugitive

rebecca’s friday prompt recuerda mi corazon [haiku my heart]
photo: gargoyleg, flickr

Vermont leaves falling

sweeping her surreal
she heaped her hoard heavenward
where no one could see

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15 thoughts on “haiku my heart.fugitive

  1. Ms Pie,
    Such a lovely and relaxing image. Almost meditational. I love, as always, your use of alliteration which draws the reader’s focus inward and forces the mind to light upon those vulnerable places of which you gently whisper.
    xoxo,
    Noelle

  2. I read it as someone giving up what she thought she wanted and now is free to truly find it or something like that. I think there is more to this piece than a simple thought of letting go.

  3. Hi Ms. Pie~ This is a lovely surreal idea to hide your cache of wondrous jewels in the sky, behind the clouds, where no one can see. How beautiful, how human. Love it.

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