impossible yet fierce
the pressure of possibilities
knocks and knocks
barking orders back to back
a might of imagination
happens to hear
without ears to listen
where weight weighs in
the pounds politely push
smoke ring blowing circles
ten timid voices climb to question
risk and reason remain
the promise of life
apostrophe might possess
broom sweeping scare of sagacity
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sunday whirl: wordle no 116
I’m loving “the pressure of possibilities,” and what that “apostrophe might possess.”
The alliteration captures and renders us as willing “hostages”. I love the direction this took! Thanks for it.
Nice use of the words!
Nicely alliterated here, ms pie. I also like the turn it took. It is nice to see you at the whirl, I haven’t seen you in ages. How have you been?
Pamela
I also like the pressure of possibilities and the alliteration you used. Thanks for visiting and I believe this was written by big hands as well.
Elizabeth
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