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January 24, 2012

we wander as one and shadow
forgetful of the bite between
a slight sliver of space and self

one step follows another and
when we meet an impasse
the downhill side smiles

calm calamity casually calls
telling us a story of freak and fret
where without walks wanting
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three word wednesday:  sliver, downhill, freak

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From → 3WW, Poetry

5 Comments
  1. Love the alliterations in the lines, especially “calm calamity casually calls”.

  2. Beautiful piece.

  3. This is a great piece. I like all the alliteration going on in it, but I especially like the line: the downhill side smiles.

  4. Belva wrote exactly what I was going to say! Love all the sounds and that line made me smile.

  5. “calm calamity casually calls”
    beautiful

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