one single impression: river and sunday scribbling: the call
photo: jg in sf, flickr
gorilla gotcha, he comes and goes
splashing water everywhere
hairy highlights big tufts of wild
the air too full to breathe
carving a canyon course
simple stream sublime
beating arms out stretched
he hollers and roars
where does the witness go
further downstream dip
scratching tales on sandy banks
a racket of recorded reasoning
Hey Mrs. Pie ~~ I love your bear analogy! 🙂 His travels are neat, I suppose the sandy banks where he scratches his tail is the most graphic.
I’m seeing rivers here, the Colorado first came to mind followed by the Mississippi, the Missouri, the Nile, the Jordan (ends completely due to irrigarion up stream), the Merrimack, the Brazos, and ending with our local San Jacinto River. These are the rivers I’ve lived close by and a few that I have visited.
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Maybe not to stay posted ~~ Towards the end did you intend to say
dip scratching tales on sandy banks
or did you intend to use the word tails?
The former would work in a poem–I forgot the name for this–but
anyway for now I am mostly thinking tails. Of course the river
is more leisurely there and tales could be exchanged, etc, i.e.
scratching.
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hi jim i love rivers too!!!! the mississippi is an awesome old river full of stories i am not so sure i would like to hear… the colorado absolutely… mighty is what comes to mind and the snake… traveling thru the northwest i did not know it ran thru three states [ i think ] and then there’s the margaret river in the southwest of australia…. now there’s a place with rivers…. and that’s what i was thinking of the most… with regards to the poem “…scratching tales..” i was thinking of writing a story on the sandy banks haven’t we all done that… in one way or another… leaving behind our thoughts and stories…. and ohhh btw loved yur comments!!!!
Yes, I like the analogy, too. Clever.
You are amazing. I like this very much.
original …I like it very much too…!
Thank you, M.P. 🙂 I’m thinking you chuckled when you thought of my tail scratching bears or whatevers in the sand. I’m sorry, now it makes things complete. Thank you.
Sitting on the sandy banks of the river could be even more inspirational than using a table at a balcony or patio under the trees. Me? I use the kitchen table with everything done via the lap top keyboard.
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I love the last para. Dip …….deep.
Neatly done by drawing comparisons!! Smart poem!!
Since then some funny picture and a great sense of humor. Excellent poem.