rebecca’s friday prompt recuerda mi corazon [haiku my heart]
photo: gargoyleg, flickr
sweeping her surreal
she heaped her hoard heavenward
where no one could see
rebecca’s friday prompt recuerda mi corazon [haiku my heart]
photo: gargoyleg, flickr
sweeping her surreal
she heaped her hoard heavenward
where no one could see
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
Your words and photo are both inspirational. : ) Have a wonderful week, Ms pie
I can’t help but wonder: Are hoards allowed in heaven?
Ms Pie,
Such a lovely and relaxing image. Almost meditational. I love, as always, your use of alliteration which draws the reader’s focus inward and forces the mind to light upon those vulnerable places of which you gently whisper.
xoxo,
Noelle
you have a way of gently taking me outside of myself.
to a higher calling and vision.
lovely…so lovely.
thank you!
so soothing, thank you!
on a sapphire stream
fleeting, fallen leaves float by
such impermanence
Lovely imagery of a slow, regular movement of the sea as it swells and rolls gathering all it can!!
This is so ‘high’. Thanks.
All the best, Boonie
Simple and sublime,
thank you,
Sue x
I read it as someone giving up what she thought she wanted and now is free to truly find it or something like that. I think there is more to this piece than a simple thought of letting go.
Hi Ms. Pie~ This is a lovely surreal idea to hide your cache of wondrous jewels in the sky, behind the clouds, where no one can see. How beautiful, how human. Love it.
This makes me think of shoving my box onto a warm safe shelf and heaving myself up after…
Hiding out.
heap
hoard
heavenward
Such powerful words.
Such flowing imagery
wow. this hits a lot 😦 very powerful ‘ku
That’s lovely!
Well done.