one single impression sunday’s prompt no 141: pause
photo: Singing Bird. , kvan3k, flickr
quiet calm gray skies
constant dripping drizzle roars
rainfall wets the world
an open window flutters
the tweet of a dry bird sings
one single impression sunday’s prompt no 141: pause
photo: Singing Bird. , kvan3k, flickr
quiet calm gray skies
constant dripping drizzle roars
rainfall wets the world
an open window flutters
the tweet of a dry bird sings
Spectacular imagery – both the photo and the words.
what a nice pause!
May its sound find the way through, branches, buildings, life itself. Impressive. Please have a good new week.
hello robert, that is a wonderful blessing…
Calm. Pause.
This is wonderful. I love the picture and poem together.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/06/between-the-breaths/
wow…i love the idea you have put in this, both pic and your verses complement each other!
hi amity, thank you for stoppin by… always love stoppin by yr blog
Absolutely wonderful! A great take on this prompt and I loved your photo too. Hugs, G
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gee, it’s good to see you around these parts, thanks for stoppin by g…
this piece was sweetly imbued with the changes that happen in nature – so quickly, the moment of a pause – from dripping wet to fluttering dry, rain’s end announced by the song of a bird – beautiful work.
hi bpw, it is just as you say, never seizes to amaze me… and haikuz are a perfect form to bring expression to nature’s world..glad you enjoyed and thank you for stoppin by
I can almost smell the damp in the air hear the drip the eaves great imagery nice flow!
How I wish I were the bird… thanks for creating sauch fabulous ambience..
This is awesome…nice picture again… 🙂
I thought of a caesura too but haven’t yet written anything for this prompt…