read write poem: day 24. Find a phrase. Je ne sais quoi An indescribable or inexpressible something. Literally, ‘I know not what’; photo: Morning Java, JamMarz, flickr
a beautiful morning
pops out from behind
the night. a hand making
motion. as a sheer silent
curtain drawn back
it’s about 5 am and i am
wide awake. i arise from the
comforts of sleeping
soundly in the security
of my soft warm bed
my morning ritual
begins. i make strong
french black coffee
and head towards
the back porch stairs
i sit outside in the
garden under the tree
enjoying the current
book i am reading
resting in the sounds of
early morning
not a second later
along comes the intruding
sound of someone speaking
requesting the time
what in the world
solitude interruptus
i look up towards the sound
and i am instantaneously blinded
by the sheer force of light
without thought i pull my
hands upward to shield my eyes
and just as quickly
the dazzling light dissipates
and i am able to see clearly
i know exactly who
this person is
he smiles and speaks
hello rachel, i’ve heard
your meditations and i’ve
come to sit with you awhile
speechless i wonder
if i am really awake
it is barefoot jesus
i wonder, does he
like his coffee black
This is really beautiful, a wonderful take on the prompt.
I am not sure I would like this experience. Sitting quietly staring into the coffee clouds without visitors would be better.
What an amazing narrative. Don’t leave me hanging, though–how does barefoot Jesus take his coffee? :0)
Really great narrative, Thanks for sharing 🙂 🙂
hugs marinela x