perhaps it is the hour
when daylight is delayed
shrouded in sightless mystery
the blind focus of silent sounds
observe the subtle movement
witness the quiet steps
explore the evening edge
and peer the peaceful voluminosity
Bones 3WW weekly three word wednesday prompt No 87: delayed, edge, focus; photo: jaman84044, photobucket
5.22.08 / 6pm
I loved “voluminosity” to describe the sky. Beautiful job!
5.22.08 / 6pm
explore the evening edge – I like that – wonder if being sleepless is another creative process of the brain telling you that you need to stay awake
I have no idea where these nonsensical comments that I am making but I hope it makes some sense
5.22.08 / 7pm
Beautiful. The photo matches perfectly.
5.22.08 / 7pm
people look at me funny when i say i get up at two or three in the morning… but to me that is the very best time of the day… i love being alive while the rest of the world sleeps…….
this was beautiful…
5.23.08 / 12am
what paisley said!
5.23.08 / 1am
Nice! the picture complements it well, thank you for your comments:)
5.23.08 / 1am
I loved the way you captured that liminal moment between night and day and the mixture of visual and sound senses.
5.23.08 / 8am
I think I know when this time occurs – its both to early and too late at the same time.
5.23.08 / 2pm
For much of my early life I existed at either side of the early hours, at one time in a rock band, arriving home then, and at another, a newsagent, and up before the birds.
To be out in such peace is fulfilling, somehow vibrant.
You capture it well.
5.23.08 / 4pm
I can see myself there, standing on the edge – this is breathtaking – thank you!
5.23.08 / 5pm
Just gorgeous, the poem and the photo.
5.23.08 / 11pm
Wonderful! Your words are so beautiful and this pic is amazing, well done!
5.24.08 / 3pm
a very lyrical description of dusk…i love that time of day.
5.26.08 / 8am
Such darkness is beautiful reread again and again.
5.26.08 / 10am
wow! love it! Great job!! I can see it clearly in my mind! wow!
5.26.08 / 2pm
gorgeous poem. I wish you many an evening like this one.
5.27.08 / 4am
Beautifully written!
6.20.08 / 3pm
Somehow i missed the point. Probably lost in translation 
Anyway … nice blog to visit.
cheers, Excitingly!!!
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