the beauty of her canvas
ejected the slight blemish
exposed in her pouting presence
as a dark dot
on the corner of
her flinching smile.
** ** ** ** **
Michelle’s Poefusion friday five:
pout, dot, flinch, eject, blemish


5 thoughts on “unfinished

  1. love the last two lines, it’s interesting to see how different everyone interpret art especially a piece like the mona lisa, I always thought she simply was amused about something

  2. I too loved the last two lines. I have always thought she was thinking something very personal and very satisfying but that’s from the look in her eyes

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