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haiku heights.day19

September 19, 2011

haiku heights day 19 challenge no 77 bold
photo: leaf, daveford, flickr

Leaf

west winds already
untethered breeze running swift
fall’s leaves gathering

cascading downward
submitting to the season
scarce a whisper caught

blue sky disappear
steel gray purple blue shadows
passers by winged clouds

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6 Comments
  1. Marsha permalink

    ah, yes, fall is here and steel gray winter is coming on winged clouds. lovely

  2. steel gray purple blue shadows – I quite like the way you got so much into this one line.

  3. This is beautiful…stand alone or together….loved the imagery.

  4. Very beautiful. Great imagery!

  5. I love your ‘fall’s leaves gathering’, since they are a part of Nature, they are alive!!!.

    Greetings, ms pie

  6. Gorgeous, scarce a whisper caught

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