rebecca’s friday recuerda mi corazon [haiku my heart]
my every day life journal day 6, page 6
day 1 napowrimo 2011
photo: tanya puntti, flickr
panoramic view
lucid light blue naked skies
whisper wanting wind
yesterday. it is good to let the mind loose to wander and relax. without distraction observe the day passing. looking outward it is late afternoon and the sky is starting to sway toward sunset. now comes the quiet just before the wings of a large bird appears bringing the night with a trail of stars dangling from golden threads. this here is where i stopped. to consider my wanting. to hear the spirit wind talking. he shares his wisdom.
napowrimo 2011. today is day 1 of 31 days of poems. this has always been an amazing experience and look forward to participating in this year’s celebration as well.
wanting wind
the sky began
to wail
Hello Ms. Pie and Happy Spring. I always love your alliteration and your lovely images. I am glad that you are starting a new season of poetry. I look forward to it. I love the post from yesterday too. Both are very meditative and serene.
Noelle
Very beautiful image and words.
Whispering, wanting wind, how I love it when the wind gets into each little crevice, whistling for attention, then moves the fields like an ocean of barley enticing you to wander over there and be apart of it all. Your words are very enticing!
Thank you,
Sue x
flower-petal arms
gracefully capture the air
leaving space for joy
the wind would be a whisper wanting wind I would think…
take me to your whisper skies!
always i find beauty here.
forgive my very late arrival. haiku my heart began with beauty and turned on a dime with a severe fever keeping me in bed for days.
i am so weak but thought i would try and at least let a few more know why they have not heard from me.
thanks for your understanding and your beautiful haiku.
Beautiful, Ms. Pie! Every line of your haiku and of your prose poem is an image, figurature language. Exquisite.
I need to consider my wantings today…
Beautiful haiku and beautiful blue.
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