a view
one single impression sunday prompt: top
photo: ferris wheel, re.mo, flickr
balance
daylight hours
atop a big wheel whirl
around and round social breeze
besiege
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one single impression sunday prompt: top
photo: ferris wheel, re.mo, flickr
balance
daylight hours
atop a big wheel whirl
around and round social breeze
besiege
what a beautiful picture and the balance indeed.. loved the freshness in the poem..very unique..
Balance, breezes, wonderful images here.
lovely, you took me there.
Social breeze – excellently done.
I like the connection you made here in your poem
I love the composition of your photo and the words are perfect for it.
Very good! I like where you’ve taken these thoughts and words, to new heights, no pun intended. Love the photo too.
oh, to be on a ferris wheel again. you feel like you’re on top of the world. wonderful poem. have a great night.
yes! your poems make me want to shout joyously
This is tiptop! Love it!
Life is like a merrygoround. Around around we go.
Yes, yes, yes.
Thank you.
swinging top…!!
Yes, balancing is so important.
Sitting at the top of Ferris wheel always simultaneously scared the shit out of me and was intensely freeing. Photo works magic with the words here… a nice interpretation!
balance
daylight hours
atop a big wheel whirl
around and round social breeze
besiege
Ms. P, this is exactly what retired people do. Especially those who sit around.
I like it when I went back to ‘words.’
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I love this- especially the line: “around and round social breeze”- so true and it makes me appreciate my hours/ minutes of solitude!