it is an exciting day for monday poetry train revisited it is the 100 edition. congrats to gautami tripathy at firmly rooted ; photo: Cuba Gallery: Black and White / farm / vintage / texture, flickr
leaving a little note tucked in the sleeve of a forgotten memorable book she hugged the house and walked away. it was after all more than enough. there were no more than a few hours left after an aeon in stasis. searching the blue sky her eyes took in every detail acutely aware each footstep brought the disappearance closer. touching everything her fingers soon grew numb.
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
ms pie this is awesome!
I love the ending!
Pamela
I loved this photograph. “…touching everything her fingers soon grew numb” – You captured the feeling of leaving so nicely!
‘tucked in the sleeve of a forgotten memorable book’
Awesome line. I enjoyed your paragraph format, as well.
This is wonderful! Capturing the moment after loss, just before you know you have to move on?
Mysterious….leaves one wanting to hear more!
often wonder how would one feel after leaving a home one has known all their lives and now it is altogether something different… or what if one was hiding out in a sense, and then one day leaves not knowing what awaits past the gate…
very nice.