eyes
closed
shifting
wandering
cool salty air speaks
riding on an endless seashore
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totally optional prompts this week topic: sound
photo: Bernzilla, flickr
You’re currently reading “music,” an entry on Piece of Pie ala Mode
11.21.08 / 6pm
It’s hard to beat ocean sounds and your words portray that so well!
11.22.08 / 12am
Almost silent in its brevity, but conjures up all the sounds of the sea.
11.22.08 / 6am
Thanks you for this! I am so missing the ocean and your few exquisite words took me back to Ocean Park Beach in Maine.
11.22.08 / 9am
So simple, yet so much said.
11.22.08 / 9pm
Still love your writing so much. So inspiring. So touching. You never know….
11.23.08 / 5pm
The music of the seashore is calling me… Wish I was there now!
11.24.08 / 5am
oh, minimalist poetry. i loved each lines and the sounds are wonderful.
11.24.08 / 9am
I love fibs, and yours is beautiful!
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there’s no such thing as beginning at the beginning- just when would that be, and who would tell the story? but some moments in a life suggest a kind of punctuation: quick-stop comma, full-stop period, or the in between caesuras of semi-colon and colon. rosalyn brown, half a heart
photo: Punctuation, The Green Album
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