Writers Island prompt No. 26: torrid and Matinee Muse: 21, reckless…the gamble; photo: jessicad_08, photobucket
this captivating love ached deep
veiled burning lining her soul
depositing collatoral damage
exceeding her sensible refinement
desire left alone burst forth
in a spontaneous blazing fire
wanting more she scanned
the hours without him
intense with blistering thirst
afternoon heat gave fuel
to the sultry atmosphere
roaming the illuminated room
reflecting a parched heart
starry-eyed in candlelight
she sat stirring
in her cool silk slip
smoldering for him
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
Ooh, I LOVE the cool silk slip in among all the hot images! I can just picture this whole scene; what lovely writing you’ve done.
great imagery, very intense.
I sure as heck hope he turned up!
the intensity of passion accumulates beautifully in your poem. It goes so well with the pic you chose to go with it………
falling into the abyss of lost control desire.
love it. we should all have at least one steamy night like that every now and then.
ps. thanks for the comment on my blog. may the torrid passion of curling sweep you up! 🙂
Nice! I love the way you intensify each bit – makes it seem dreamlike.
Also, the way you’ve wound desire and fire so well. 🙂
Ooh, the want is thick.
whew… that was hot… i love the close on this… i know that feeling well,, and wish sometimes i have not lived my last night smoldering in cool silk slip…….
Is that passionate !!!!!!
Very intense portrayed mood ..wonderful imagery .
Desire comes out strong… and the picture is apt- liked it!
sultry writing
You had me going…
😀
word by word
she scanned
the hours without him – this really hits! Nice poem!!
Tangible passion in words ~ very intense, I felt it, too.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques