carpe diem weekend meditation no 3
on the river troiku
haiku, basho
on the river
lights float to the horizon
the dead rejoice
troiku, ms pie
on the river
buoyant bound bright stars roaming
crowd the once quiet
lights float to the horizon
parallel paths heading home
soaring side by side
the dead rejoices
weightless wonders gather speed
soundless transmission
notes to self: my first troiku .. anticipation… after reading ‘the wandering spirit’, … thank you Chèvrefeuille… though first i saw the photo… the troiku unfolded in such a way… i look forward to creating more… those poems that won’t leave of their own accord… i still wanna change this .. somehow it is unfinished …
Piece of Pie ala Mode 
I like this very much. Your troiku soars like the lights.
Gorgeous Troiku, what a nicely created troiku … it looks so natural as if you have done this more often than just the first time.
Beautifully done for the first one:)
Wonderful read.
Lovely!