river birch branches
soft sway idle kiss collide
window gaze whisper
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Carpe Diem Special #44, Kikusha-Ni’s “the dusk in rain” kasen renga
river birch branches
soft sway idle kiss collide
window gaze whisper
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Carpe Diem Special #44, Kikusha-Ni’s “the dusk in rain” kasen renga
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soft sway idle kiss collide… I like it.. nice flow to the words..
Nicely done, welcome at Carpe Diem, hope to see more of your haiku/senryu on Carpe Diem.
simply wonderful
how unique – a window gaze whisper…nice one
Dreamy and nice … very nice