5 thoughts on “quicksand

  1. that’s what and how mice are created for.. 🙂

    sharp and alert, lest a trap is at the corner…:)

    i like this one.

    thanks for taking part,


  2. I like it bunches, Mis Pie. 🙂
    You have written the plight of this poor little soul so well. I feel very sorry for what is about to happen. It is like shooting Bambi. (He could be Ziggy’s little friend!)
    Thank you for enduring my attempt this week. I had trouble with the words but new my plot/theme very well.

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