one single impression: this week’s prompt by leo is joie de vivre (the joy of living)
photo: Seashells, miqul, flickr
i’ve used tanka [5-7-5-7-7] and a cleave [for those who wanna know] which was one of the prompts for read write poem april 2010 napowrimo
anchored in your blue eyes watching the drift of tides
swimming in a sea of blue shifting sandbar wet door reveal
backstroke blue divine nestled sleeping shells
submerge serenade sublime simple treasures lure me near
the line of your lips thrill me surplus exhilaration
4 thoughts on “inamorata”
This is my first exposure to the cleave. You did fine with your five liner, I should have seen if you have posted other cleave poems.
I might play with it a little but not right away. It looks like a fun thing that a mathematician or an engineer would like to do. 🙂 I’m the engineer so perhaps? …
surplus exhilaration! describes the emotion so well with much emphasis
simple treasure & surplus exhilaration. Beautiful.
I love the two voices in this one piece. It’s like a call and response. Lovely.