OneSingleImpression, Poetry, tanka

inamorata

one single impression: this week’s prompt by leo is joie de vivre (the joy of living)
photo: Seashells, miqul, flickr

i’ve used tanka [5-7-5-7-7] and a cleave [for those who wanna know] which was one of the prompts for read write poem april 2010 napowrimo

anchored in your blue eyes  watching the drift of tides
swimming in a sea of blue  shifting sandbar wet door reveal
backstroke blue divine  nestled sleeping shells
submerge serenade sublime   simple treasures lure me near
the line of your lips thrill me   surplus exhilaration

inamorata. lover

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4 thoughts on “inamorata

  1. This is my first exposure to the cleave. You did fine with your five liner, I should have seen if you have posted other cleave poems.
    I might play with it a little but not right away. It looks like a fun thing that a mathematician or an engineer would like to do. 🙂 I’m the engineer so perhaps? …
    ..

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