thommyg’s three word wednesday 3ww this week offers: demure, offend, volatile
photo: gordon saunders, flickr
grasping at divine divinity
the dogma offends the earthbound
fickle the four fine winds
toss the tug of volatile views
learning to lean in lightly
the docile swaying strokes the demure
poached in a round rosy ring
the egg of ego softens with a shatter
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I very much liked your words and your vision. I hope you will not mind me playing with it.
A Mummer’s Eye View
I too love the gesture.
I mean this thing’s pantomime
if it is at all.
No matter, we shall go
down the path of dancing hands
tracing out sacred
signs passed down to us.
We will find though it softens
that still it shatters.
thank you christopher, love the reflection of your intuitive view….
This is just brilliant … wonderfully written!
Well crafted–those last two lines just blew me away! Beautifully done.
hi christine thx for stopping by, funny wasn’t sure abt those two lines possibly too farout…glad it worked…
beautiful lines throughout this. Nicely done.
thx thomg, always nice to c u arnd these parts…
Love the amazing final two lines of this: so satisfyingly concluded!