Big Tent Poetry, OneSingleImpression, Poetry

sugar coated

big tent poetry: prompt this week is a two-step process. a little of this a little of that. something abt (1) first focus on this one gesture and then (2) write abt something completely different yet affected by step one you write… sounds fun to me… instantly brought to mind the keys, ie, piano… a sacred spot.. ; wandered over to the wonderful haiku blog one single impression: this week, pensive;  found this beautiful foto which completely caught the musicality all wrapped in one expression…. photo: Chiama piano, by iskra_m, flickr

extending the fingers the thumb placed perfectly
a  slight bend floating fingertips
a resting sigh untangle

two flat feet untroubled eyes responds the heart
heaving with weight the notes chatter endlessly
shifting towards expression the ear listens quiet

a sensible sound calls attention a backward echo
alone, begins the clutter of a song
gushing to the surface

i just wanted you to notice me
to turn your eyes in favor
you and i alone

a waiting wandering kiss

in the middle of
this and that
stirring nonchalantly

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9 thoughts on “sugar coated

  1. “i just wanted you to notice me
    to turn your eyes in favor
    you and i alone
    a waiting wandering kiss”

    Wonderful lines, “Mrs. Pie.” (I’ve never called you that before!) Reading it, I couldn’t help but feel a need here.
    I would turn my eyes if I know which way. 🙂
    ..

  2. Oh yes, thank you for the travel wishes. I normally wouldn’t be blogging but it is raining in Quebec City tonight so we stayed in and I really needed to answer comments. 🙂
    ..

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