we write poems: wordle ;
photo: Calm Horizon, Heaven`s Gate (John), flickr
the drought appeared
landing in a helicopter
whirlwind circle
the day filled with a
bad happy birthday cake
candle circle sorrow
glacial berg ice cold
the drown of a distant sea
numb nervous hot desert sand
mad and hardly obsess-ive
the carbon of my being
*and the wonderful miss lena horne who recently past away here’s her 1943 rendition of stormy weather
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The last line nailed the poem. Interesting to see what birthday images everyone has.
A single element to portray the elements.
This poem left me thinking about the bad happy birthday cake. The image will haunt me tonight.
http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2010/06/drought-wordle.html
how’d I miss Lena Horne’s leaving?
“the carbon of my being” –nice phrase,
love the drought/helicopter thought.
Bad weathers, too, would pass.
I like how you gathered together all the elements one by one – step by step – to fully paint the real sentiment expressed in the poem which you saved to reveal in the end.
The poem pulled me as a reader to something like a window and there I saw your sentiments defined.
Thanks for dropping by my web nook.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
nice one!
Pamela
I love that opening image. Nice use of the wordle.
The words themselves evoke a certain rhythm in the piece, along with your alliteration — that plus your use of the prompt words works very nicely here. I am going to be thinking about that bad birthday cake for a long time.
-Nicole