3WW, Big Tent Poetry, pantoum, Poetry

stirred up

big tent poetry monday prompt: anger pantoum….this was a most enjoyable exercise.. ; thommygz three word wednesday: hidden, noble, roam; photo: Female Common HawkSteve aka Crispin Swan, flickr

provoked
a wild way of thinking breaks loose
passing by like a hurricane
blowing off the roof

a wild way of thinking breaks loose
a strong winged noble force
blowing off the roof
a somewhat hidden now roams

a strong winged noble force
rebellious temper ignites
a somewhat hidden now roams
the sifting surety singes

rebellious temper ignites
passing by like a hurricane
the sifting surety singes
provoked

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14 thoughts on “stirred up

  1. I had to look up what a Pantoum is – I might try one, maybe with this coming week’s Three Words (wasn’t really aware of the site).

    The choice of the falcon pic really gives this poem a punch! Wonderful words!

  2. Terrific use of the form and photo — that word “provoked” was terrific to work off of. Enjoyed reading your poem.

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