magpie tales no 18: photo of pencil holder
i can’t picture in my mind
a reason to write beyond this
there’s hardly any time
a lot of the fair portion
is spent wading in water
near the deep end
soaking in stasis
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magpie tales no 18: photo of pencil holder
i can’t picture in my mind
a reason to write beyond this
there’s hardly any time
a lot of the fair portion
is spent wading in water
near the deep end
soaking in stasis
interesting, fair portion wading in deep water……you have me thinking….. I may have to use one of those sharp pencils – enjoyed ….bkm
Oh how well I know that feeling!
You said it perfectly:
“soaking in Stasis.”
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It flows like the water the imagery conveys.
And that feeling can be daunting … very well written!
“wading in water
near the deep end”
That can be a slippery slope. Go on down and let us know what you find. 😉
Writer’s Block. Ach. Wishing you many found words soon.
i’ve been subjected to a bit of writer’s block myself lately. hope you find your words soon. have a great weekend.
Stay away from the deep end. 🙂
I love the phrase – wading in water near the deep end – a terrific piece!
Have you been reading my mind for the past month? Perfectly expressed.
I’m always wading in that water in the deep end.
Near the deep end is not the deep end…keep paddling!!
Even the number of sharply pointed pencils can be a bit daunting!!
At 65, I’ve done it! My poetry book – Life’s Journey by Carmen Henesy – is out on Amazon!
( Poems about the things that have been important to me in my journey through life, some humorous, some sad, some that may have meaning to you as well )
http://www.amazon.com/Lifes-Journey-1-Carmen-Henesy/dp/1451547366/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1274652997&sr=1-1
‘soaking in stassis’ Boy, do I know all about that!
Near the deep end, soaking in stasis… blew my mind. Powerful, very powerful.
and relearning how to swim, again and again…nice magpie!
I find myself more often just pushed into the deep end..sharp and to the point Magpie Well Done!
Well done!
What an image! “Wading in water near the deep end, soaking in stasis.” I believe I’m going to carry this little gem around in my mind today. Wonderful.
So much power in such few words.
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/06/magpie-tale-18-voice-of-pencils.html
very short but fresh point of view stated here.
loved the swimming in deep end idea.
Cheers!
Smiles!
mine is up.