read write poem: napowrimo no 1 shuffle a poem. 5 song titles write a poem
photo: there must be some way outta here
hey joe
always wondered
where you went
strolling a
still desert
suddenly singing
the wind cries mary
the taste
of gritty sand
brings back the red ring
stone free i’m
spared the stumble
traveling caravan
tinkling bells
bangles and charms
hidden from sight
little wing etched in ink
infinite grains
whirling webs
shifting sentiment
castles are made of sand
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Fun, indeed!
This has a really great, vagrant feel to it. The lack of punctuation works well here. I hope you’ll check my entry out seeing as it includes a Jimi song as well! Spanish Castle Magic!
I like how the song titles are so hard to discern; the danger with this prompt is that the writing could be forced around the titles and the poem read awkwardly. Well done for avoiding that.
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nice. a thoughtful sandy journey
good luck for April
cheers Janet
Cool sand imagery… gosh I love “the wind cries mary”..
Rock on for Napowrimo! It’s day 2..
I loved this. It is familiar and took me places that I haven’t visited for years.Thanks
nicely done. I love this sort of prompt–with such random input, you never know what you’re going to find.
This is good indeed. Great I discovered you.